[yocto] [PATCH][yocto-docs] Ref manual, ch 15 -- minor link changes, grammar.

Robert P. J. Day rpjday at crashcourse.ca
Fri Aug 8 02:31:55 PDT 2014


Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday at crashcourse.ca>

---

  i'm guessing that the OE wiki page for bitbake is the closest thing
there is to an "official" bitbake web page, so i'll just use that as a
replacement for all berlios.de links i run across, unless someone has
a better suggestion.

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml
index 686b48a..17b8e97 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml
@@ -54,6 +54,8 @@
                 announcements.</para></listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
     </para>
+    For more Yocto Project-related mailing lists, see the Yocto Project community mailing lists page
+    <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/tools-resources/community/mailing-lists'>here</ulink>.
 </section>

 <section id='resources-irc'>
@@ -80,7 +82,7 @@
                 Project.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para><emphasis>
                 <ulink url='http://www.intel.com/'>Intel Corporation</ulink>:</emphasis>
-                The company who acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and began
+                The company that acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and began
                 development on the Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para><emphasis>
                 <ulink url='&OE_HOME_URL;'>OpenEmbedded</ulink>:</emphasis>
@@ -89,7 +91,7 @@
                 Poky derives from and contributes back to the OpenEmbedded
                 project.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para><emphasis>
-                <ulink url='http://developer.berlios.de/projects/bitbake/'>
+                <ulink url='http://www.openembedded.org/wiki/BitBake'>
                 BitBake</ulink>:</emphasis> The tool used to process metadata.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para><emphasis>
                 <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_BB_URL;'>BitBake User Manual</ulink>:</emphasis>
@@ -116,7 +118,7 @@
         pull requests,
         or by submitting patches through email.
         For information on how to do both as well as information on how
-        to find out who is the maintainer for areas of code, see the
+        to identify the maintainer for each area of code, see the
         "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#how-to-submit-a-change'>How to Submit a Change</ulink>"
         section in the Yocto Project Development Manual.
     </para>

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