[yocto] [yocto-docs][PATCH] dev-manual: minor grammatical tweaks to chapter 4
Robert P. J. Day
rpjday at crashcourse.ca
Fri Aug 1 01:47:01 PDT 2014
Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday at crashcourse.ca>
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diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
index eb24643..a3852c4 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
<title>Developing a Board Support Package (BSP)</title>
<para>
- A BSP is a package of recipes that, when applied during a build, results in
+ A BSP is a collection of recipes that, when applied during a build, results in
an image that you can run on a particular board.
Thus, the package when compiled into the new image, supports the operation of the board.
</para>
@@ -156,8 +156,9 @@
Yocto Project Board Support Package (BSP) Developer's Guide.</para>
<note>Five BSPs exist that are part of the
Yocto Project release: <filename>genericx86</filename>, <filename>genericx86-64</filename>,
- <filename>beaglebone</filename>,
- <filename>mpc8315e</filename>, and <filename>edgerouter</filename>.
+ <filename>beaglebone</filename> (ARM),
+ <filename>mpc8315e</filename> (PowerPC),
+ and <filename>edgerouter</filename> (MIPS).
The recipes and configurations for these five BSPs are located and dispersed
within the <link linkend='source-directory'>Source Directory</link>.
On the other hand, BSP layers for Crown Bay,
@@ -310,7 +311,7 @@
kernel.
Thus, everything further to the right in the structure is based on the
<filename>linux-yocto-3.4</filename> kernel.
- Branch points to right in the figure represent where the
+ Branch points to the right in the figure represent where the
<filename>linux-yocto-3.4</filename> kernel is modified for specific hardware
or types of kernels, such as real-time kernels.
Each leaf thus represents the end-point for a kernel designed to run on a specific
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