[yocto] [PATCH] yocto-docs: A couple minor fixes to the kernel usage manual.

Robert P. J. Day rpjday at crashcourse.ca
Sat Apr 13 04:00:41 PDT 2013


Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday at crashcourse.ca>

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diff --git a/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-doc-intro.xml b/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-doc-intro.xml
index c1cc22b..7ed9f55 100644
--- a/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-doc-intro.xml
+++ b/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-doc-intro.xml
@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@
 <section id='kernel-intro-section'>
     <title>Introduction</title>
     <para>
-        The Yocto Project presents kernels as a fully patched, history-clean Git
+        The Yocto Project presents kernels as fully-patched, history-clean Git
         repositories.
         Each repository represents selected features, board support,
-        and configurations extensively tested by the Yocto Project.
+        and configurations tested extensively by the Yocto Project.
         Yocto Project kernels allow the end user to leverage community
         best practices to seamlessly manage the development, build and debug cycles.
     </para>

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