[yocto] [yocto-docs][PATCH 04/11] documentation/poky-ref-manual: minor improvements
Paul Eggleton
paul.eggleton at linux.intel.com
Mon Oct 1 11:05:23 PDT 2012
Adjust a few sentences so that they make sense.
Signed-off-by: Paul Eggleton <paul.eggleton at linux.intel.com>
---
documentation/poky-ref-manual/ref-variables.xml | 17 +++++++++--------
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/documentation/poky-ref-manual/ref-variables.xml b/documentation/poky-ref-manual/ref-variables.xml
index 49bed9c..af1a194 100644
--- a/documentation/poky-ref-manual/ref-variables.xml
+++ b/documentation/poky-ref-manual/ref-variables.xml
@@ -797,12 +797,13 @@ FILESPATH = "${@base_set_filespath([ "${FILE_DIRNAME}/${PF}", \
<glossentry id='var-IMAGE_FEATURES'><glossterm>IMAGE_FEATURES</glossterm>
<glossdef>
- <para>The list of features present in images.
- Typically, you configure this variable in image recipes.
- Note that you can add extra features to the image by using the
+ <para>The list of features to include in an images.
+ Typically, you configure this variable in an image recipe.
+ Note that you can also add extra features to the image by using the
<filename><link linkend='var-EXTRA_IMAGE_FEATURES'>EXTRA_IMAGE_FEATURES</link></filename> variable.
See the "<link linkend="ref-features-image">Images</link>" section for the
- list of features present in images built by the OpenEmbedded build system.</para>
+ full list of features which can be included in images built by the
+ OpenEmbedded build system.</para>
</glossdef>
</glossentry>
@@ -1880,8 +1881,8 @@ recipes-graphics/xorg-font/font-alias_1.0.3.bb:PR = "${INC_PR}.3"
<glossentry id='var-SECTION'><glossterm>SECTION</glossterm>
<glossdef>
- <para>The section where package should be put.
- Package managers use this variable.</para>
+ <para>The section in which packages should be categorised.
+ Package management utilities may make use of this variable.</para>
</glossdef>
</glossentry>
@@ -1918,7 +1919,7 @@ recipes-graphics/xorg-font/font-alias_1.0.3.bb:PR = "${INC_PR}.3"
<glossdef>
<para>
Specifies the endian byte order of the target system.
- The variable is either "le" for little-endian or "be" for big-endian.
+ The value should be either "le" for little-endian or "be" for big-endian.
</para>
</glossdef>
</glossentry>
@@ -1927,7 +1928,7 @@ recipes-graphics/xorg-font/font-alias_1.0.3.bb:PR = "${INC_PR}.3"
<glossdef>
<para>
Specifies the number of bits for the target system CPU.
- The variable is either "32" or "64".
+ The value should be either "32" or "64".
</para>
</glossdef>
</glossentry>
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