[yocto] [PATCH] Documentation: Some trivial tweaks to Quick Start Guide

[Robert P. J. Day]

Nothing major, just some simple cleanup in the QS Guide.

Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday at crashcourse.ca>

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diff --git a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
index 0f2ecf4..b3e7595 100644
--- a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
+++ b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@

 <section id='fake-title'>
     <title>Yocto Project Quick Start</title>
-    <para>Copyright © 2010-2011 Linux Foundation</para>
+    <para>Copyright © 2010-2012 Linux Foundation</para>
 </section>

 <section id='welcome'>
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
         rich Yocto Project Development Community into which you can tap.
     </para>
     <para>
-        Finally, you might find the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for the Yocto Project
+        Finally, you can find the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for the Yocto Project
         at <ulink url='https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/FAQ'>Yocto Project FAQ</ulink> and
         the FAQ appendix located in
         <ulink url='http://www.yoctoproject.org/docs/latest/poky-ref-manual/poky-ref-manual.html'>
@@ -470,8 +470,8 @@
         </para>

         <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem><para>Install the stand-alone Yocto toolchain tarball.</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para>Download the pre-built image that will boot with QEMU.
+            <listitem><para>Install the appropriate stand-alone Yocto toolchain tarball.</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para>Download the pre-built kernel image that will boot with QEMU.
                 You need to be sure to get the QEMU image that matches your target machine’s
                 architecture (e.g. x86, ARM, etc.).</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>Download the filesystem image for your target machine's architecture.
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@
                 script and support files, from the appropriate directory under
                 <ulink url='http://downloads.yoctoproject.org/releases/yocto/yocto-1.1/toolchain/'></ulink>.
                 Toolchains are available for 32-bit and 64-bit development systems from the
-                <filename>i686</filename> and <filename>x86_64</filename> directories, respectively.
+                <filename>i686</filename> and <filename>x86-64</filename> directories, respectively.
                 Each type of development system supports five target architectures.
                 The tarball files are named such that a string representing the host system appears
                 first in the filename and then is immediately followed by a string representing
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@
             </para>

             <literallayout class='monospaced'>
-     poky-eglibc<<emphasis>host_system</emphasis>>-<<emphasis>arch</emphasis>>-toolchain-gmae-<<emphasis>release</emphasis>>.tar.bz2
+     poky-eglibc-<<emphasis>host_system</emphasis>>-<<emphasis>arch</emphasis>>-toolchain-gmae-<<emphasis>release</emphasis>>.tar.bz2

      Where:
          <<emphasis>host_system</emphasis>> is a string representing your development system:
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@
                 Be sure to use the kernel that matches the architecture you want to simulate.
                 Download areas exist for the five supported machine architectures:
                 <filename>qemuarm</filename>, <filename>qemumips</filename>, <filename>qemuppc</filename>,
-                <filename>qemux86</filename>, and <filename>qemux86_64</filename>.
+                <filename>qemux86</filename>, and <filename>qemux86-64</filename>.
             </para>

             <para>
@@ -639,13 +639,13 @@
             </para>

             <para>
-                Continuing with the example, the following two commands setup the emulation
+                Continuing with the example, the following two commands set up the emulation
                 environment and launch QEMU.
                 This example assumes the root filesystem tarball has been downloaded and expanded, and
                 that the kernel and filesystem are for a 32-bit target architecture.
                 <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ source /opt/poky/1.1/environment-setup-i686-poky-linux
-     $ runqemu qemux86 bzImage-3.0-qemux86-1.1.bin \
+     $ runqemu qemux86 bzImage-qemux86.bin \
      core-image-sato-qemux86.ext3
                 </literallayout>
             </para>

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