[meta-freescale] [Documentation][PATCH] release-notes: grammar edits to introduction

[Otavio Salvador]

On Fri, Jan 16, 2015 at 10:24 AM, Daiane Angolini <daiane.list at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Fri, Jan 16, 2015 at 4:00 AM, Bob Cochran <yocto at mindchasers.com> wrote:
>> Signed-off-by: Bob Cochran <yocto at mindchasers.com>
>> -The BSP upstreaming cycle starts just after a |freescale_release_name|
>> +The BSP upstream cycle starts just after a |freescale_release_name|
>
> Here I need Otavio's help.
>
> Otavio, I remember we have already discussed regarding the difference
> of "upstreaming" and "upstream" but now I don't remember exactly what
> =P
>
> I would say Bob's suggestion is ok, what do you think?

As not being a native I mean have a wrong understand here. However I
think we need to keep clear in the text that there is a flow of
changes which _never_ ends, starting with the release.

Bob, as a native, do you have a better idea?

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