[meta-freescale] [Documentation][PATCH 30/31] RN: Check spelling and minor text adjustments
Daiane Angolini
daiane.list at gmail.com
Fri Oct 24 18:15:13 PDT 2014
Replace "userspace" by "user space".
Check spelling.
Add some missing punctuation.
Signed-off-by: Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini at freescale.com>
---
release-notes/source/Acknowledgement.rst | 8 ++++----
release-notes/source/fsl-userspace-pkg.rst | 12 ++++++------
release-notes/source/known-issues.rst | 4 ++--
release-notes/source/machines-maintainers.rst | 11 ++++++-----
release-notes/source/pkggrp-img.rst | 4 ++--
release-notes/source/test-results.rst | 4 ++--
release-notes/source/userspace-pkg.rst | 11 +++++------
7 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
diff --git a/release-notes/source/Acknowledgement.rst b/release-notes/source/Acknowledgement.rst
index cda39ef..563c0b6 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/Acknowledgement.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/Acknowledgement.rst
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
.. include:: variables.inc
-===============
-Acknowledgement
-===============
+================
+Acknowledgements
+================
The FSL BSP Community is a community effort of keeping and mantaining
a Freescale boards/chips layer for the Yocto Project.
@@ -19,6 +19,6 @@ a Freescale boards/chips layer for the Yocto Project.
.. only:: not html
The statistics can be seen at the |project_name| website. It has
- not been included here as it changes every time bugfixes are
+ not been included here as it changes every time bug fixes are
included during the maintenance cycle of the release and it would
be outdated most of time.
diff --git a/release-notes/source/fsl-userspace-pkg.rst b/release-notes/source/fsl-userspace-pkg.rst
index ec08a51..9ac504c 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/fsl-userspace-pkg.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/fsl-userspace-pkg.rst
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Freescale Userspace Packages
-============================
+Freescale User Space Packages
+=============================
This section shows the version package for each board.
Those packages provide hardware acceleration for GPU or VPU,
hardware optimization or some hardware test tools.
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@ hardware optimization or some hardware test tools.
but with optimizations for ARM.
* **Hardware-specific** is applicable when the package was designed to
- be executed in a specific hardware, and it does not make sense
- in other hardware. For example, imx-test is a test package for
+ be executed on a specific hardware, and it does not make sense
+ on other hardware. For example, imx-test is a test package for
imx boards. It can be cross-compiled for any other core, although
- it will only act as expect if executed on imx boards.
+ it will only behave as expect if executed on imx boards.
The package version and variety varies on :ref:`soc-hierarchy`.
For example, machines with i.MX28 SoC does not have VPU, the recipe imx-vpu is not needed.
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Version by :ref:`soc-hierarchy`
The following table shows the version of each package depending on the :ref:`soc-hierarchy`.
.. tabularcolumns:: L | C | C | C | C | C | C
-.. table:: Userspace package version by SoC hierarchy
+.. table:: User space package version by SoC hierarchy
.. include:: soc-pkg.inc
diff --git a/release-notes/source/known-issues.rst b/release-notes/source/known-issues.rst
index 1bd5d52..7613310 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/known-issues.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/known-issues.rst
@@ -35,10 +35,10 @@ Known Issues
.. only:: not html
- The list of known issues for the |project_name| can be seen using the following URL:
+ The list of known issues for the |project_name| can be seen at the following URL:
https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org/buglist.cgi?quicksearch=meta-fsl-arm
- It has not been included here as it changes every time bugfixes are
+ It has not been included here as it changes every time bug fixes are
included during the maintenance cycle of the release and it would
be outdated most of time.
diff --git a/release-notes/source/machines-maintainers.rst b/release-notes/source/machines-maintainers.rst
index db5b2dc..5ac5e7f 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/machines-maintainers.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/machines-maintainers.rst
@@ -1,10 +1,11 @@
.. include:: variables.inc
-Machine Mantainers
+Machine Maintainers
==================
-Since |project_name| Release 1.6 (Daisy), the maintainer field in machine configuration file of
-meta-fsl-arm and meta-fsl-arm-extra machines is mandatory for any new board to be added.
+Since |project_name| Release 1.6 (Daisy), the maintainer field in machine configuration
+files of **meta-fsl-arm** and **meta-fsl-arm-extra** is mandatory for any new board
+to be added.
So now on, every new board must have someone assigned as maintainer.
This ensures, in long term, all boards with a maintainer assigned.
@@ -19,8 +20,8 @@ The maintainer duties:
* Keep test cycle updated
* Keep the most usual images building and booting
-When a build error is faced, the maintainer will "fix" it. For those maintainers with kernel control (meta-fsl-arm-extra),
-it is expected that they properly fix the kernel issue (when it's a kernel issue). However anything out of community control
+When a build error is detected, the maintainer will "fix" it. For those maintainers with kernel control (meta-fsl-arm-extra),
+it is expected that they properly fix the kernel issue (when it's a kernel issue). However, anything out of community control
should be worked around anyway.
Machines with maintainers
diff --git a/release-notes/source/pkggrp-img.rst b/release-notes/source/pkggrp-img.rst
index 0958686..808c96d 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/pkggrp-img.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/pkggrp-img.rst
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
PackageGroups and Images
========================
-The |project_name| provides a list of PACKAGEGROUPS and images intended to easy
+The |project_name| provides a list of PACKAGEGROUPS and images intended to ease
the initial development of custom applications.
The main goal is not to provide a production solution, on the contrary, it should
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ PACKAGEGROUPS
The following list shows the current PACKAGEGROUPs available in |release_name|
when using |project_name|.
-You can understand what is a PACKAGEGROUPS and learn how to use it in `Yocto Project Development Manual <http://www.yoctoproject.org/docs/1.6.1/dev-manual/dev-manual.html#usingpoky-extend-customimage-customtasks>`_
+You can understand what a PACKAGEGROUPS is and learn how to use it in `Yocto Project Development Manual <http://www.yoctoproject.org/docs/1.6.1/dev-manual/dev-manual.html#usingpoky-extend-customimage-customtasks>`_
.. include:: packagegroups.inc
diff --git a/release-notes/source/test-results.rst b/release-notes/source/test-results.rst
index b5f31b4..d8cebc2 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/test-results.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/test-results.rst
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ Test results
Freescale has a complete test cycle for the BSP released. It
includes tests for Linux Kernel for the GPU package and for
-the VPU package (and all other package needed by the BSP, such as imx-lib)
+the VPU package (and all other package needed by the BSP, such as imx-lib).
The results and known issues, from Linux Kernel, GPU and VPU
packages can be found in the Freescale Release Notes
-(Download tab of freescale.com/imx)
+(Download tab of freescale.com/imx).
For boards from meta-fsl-arm-extra, the test cycle is performed by
each mantainer.
diff --git a/release-notes/source/userspace-pkg.rst b/release-notes/source/userspace-pkg.rst
index 6c349a0..fe46737 100644
--- a/release-notes/source/userspace-pkg.rst
+++ b/release-notes/source/userspace-pkg.rst
@@ -1,11 +1,10 @@
-Userspace Packages
-==================
+User Space Packages
+===================
-There is a huge number of userspace packages provided by the Yocto
-Project. The following table shows some version for few highligthed
-packages.
+There is a huge number of user space packages provided by the Yocto Project.
+The following table shows some version for few highlighted packages.
.. tabularcolumns:: l | c | l
-.. table:: Main userspace package versions
+.. table:: Main user space package versions
.. include:: userspace-pkg.inc
--
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