[meta-freescale] [Documentation][PATCH] Some grammar edits for FSL Community FAQ

Daiane Angolini daiane.list at gmail.com
Mon Nov 3 04:07:35 PST 2014


On Mon, Nov 3, 2014 at 12:27 AM, Bob Cochran <yocto at mindchasers.com> wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Bob Cochran <yocto at mindchasers.com>
> ---
>  FAQ/source/all.rst   |   99 +++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
>  FAQ/source/index.rst |    2 +-
>  2 files changed, 50 insertions(+), 51 deletions(-)

Thanks a lot, Bob.

Please, for subject use "FAQ: Some grammar edits"

Or something like that.


One more comment inline

>
> diff --git a/FAQ/source/all.rst b/FAQ/source/all.rst
> index 586e7e9..0d0cae9 100644
> --- a/FAQ/source/all.rst
> +++ b/FAQ/source/all.rst
> @@ -1,37 +1,36 @@
>  How can I contribute to the project?
>  ------------------------------------
>
> -* Subscribe to the `list <http://freescale.github.io/#contributing>`_
> -* Check the ``README`` file of the layer you are trying to patch, it has the
> -  steps to start contributing. In resume, create your commits locally,
> +* Subscribe to the `mailing list <http://freescale.github.io/#contributing>`_
> +* Check the ``README`` file of the layer you are trying to patch. It lists the
> +  steps to start contributing. To summarize: create your commits locally,
>    format them into patches (``git format-patch``) and send them to the
>    list (``git send-email``)
>
>  How can I build an image?
>  -------------------------
>
> -Steps are detailed on `fsl-community-bsp-platform <https://github.com/Freescale/fsl-community-bsp-platform>`_ repository.
> +Steps are detailed here: `fsl-community-bsp-platform <https://github.com/Freescale/fsl-community-bsp-platform>`_
>
>
>  Bitbake encountered an error, what can I do?
>  --------------------------------------------

Would you, please, replace "Bitbake" by "BitBake" here?

Daiane


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